Thursday, November 11, 2010

Quote, paraphrase, and citation #3

“Media is responsible for creating ideals about body image, owing to which several teenagers (especially girls) suffer from inferiority complex and resort to unhealthy practices to lose weight and get skinny.

This web site talks about the effects media has on teens, positive and negative, and they specifically state my topic in the 2nd sentence of the negative effects on teens. This also states that my problem is not the only affect on teens but by putting it as the second sentence then it must be a very high and dangerous problem.

I think this will help me improve on my blog because it’s another source I can use for back up on my blog. I think the more websites I have that state that my problem is a real issue that they will take it more seriously and realize that it affects not only our school but schools world wide as well.

Manohar, Uttara. "buzzle.com." www.buzzle.com. N.p., 2010. Web. 11 Nov 2010. <http://www.buzzle.com/articles/media-effects-on-teenagers.html>.

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